Revision

So it looks like I'll be sticking with my primary subject matter on the cultural tattoos.

I've been contemplating on this topic for more than a couple of years and I feel that I'm passionate it enough to follow through with it.

Start strong Finish Strong is my motto this semester. Time to make it happen.

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This is the revision I came up with thanks to some feedback and rethinking.

Problem Statement:

There is a growing issue with Bay Area Filipino-Americans misappropriating indigenous tribal tattoos due to the lack of information about the tradition.

Purpose Statement:

The purpose of this study was to provide awareness and educate the target group along with the tattoo artists that may unintentionally contribute to the problem.

If anyone is following at all, you're more than welcome to leave feedback. =3